Honey, you DO. Yours is even more eloquent. That said, what I really enjoyed about her story (probably because it's RP) is how masculine it sounded. It was just very real sounding. All guyish vernacular. And very hot. But you know how to write HOT. With gorgeous imagery. And stuff that also gives me DPS. :P
Fuck, I wish I could write something right now, though. GAH, IT'S SO FRUSTRATING. I'm all tingly in the right places and can't do anything about it. :whines:
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Date: 2010-03-19 01:54 pm (UTC)Even if you can't, think of the loveliness you've got to look forward to when you get home.
Trust me, it's really good. I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THIS.
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Date: 2010-03-19 03:00 pm (UTC)Honey, you DO. Yours is even more eloquent. That said, what I really enjoyed about her story (probably because it's RP) is how masculine it sounded. It was just very real sounding. All guyish vernacular. And very hot. But you know how to write HOT. With gorgeous imagery. And stuff that also gives me DPS. :P
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Date: 2010-03-19 03:31 pm (UTC)And stuff that also gives me DPS. :P
I do try.
oh if you only knew how much.Fuck, I wish I could write something right now, though. GAH, IT'S SO FRUSTRATING. I'm all tingly in the right places and can't do anything about it. :whines:
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Date: 2010-03-20 05:07 am (UTC)I READ IT AND OMFG ASDFJKLASDFJKLADFJKLASDJFKLAFJADKLS I can't even....I'll be in my bunk.....
And Miss "I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THIS" WHAT EVER I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE YOU!!!!