Honey, you DO. Yours is even more eloquent. That said, what I really enjoyed about her story (probably because it's RP) is how masculine it sounded. It was just very real sounding. All guyish vernacular. And very hot. But you know how to write HOT. With gorgeous imagery. And stuff that also gives me DPS. :P
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Date: 2010-03-19 03:00 pm (UTC)Honey, you DO. Yours is even more eloquent. That said, what I really enjoyed about her story (probably because it's RP) is how masculine it sounded. It was just very real sounding. All guyish vernacular. And very hot. But you know how to write HOT. With gorgeous imagery. And stuff that also gives me DPS. :P