Too many effing gem-lines to even quote, so I'm not going to spam you with what you already know. I do, however, want to slobber all over the beginning part. Can't speak for everyone else, but my favorite part is the established relationship and how you set it up. It really felt like an honest portrayal of the Draco and Ron relationship situation. The complaining and mild arguing was spot-on and yet showed a level of I-don't-mean-it caring that reminds the reader that the two really do love one-another. Your domestic bits are my absolute favorite parts.
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Date: 2009-09-03 02:49 pm (UTC)